`Camping holidays are better than hotel holidays´
Some people think that camping holidays are very boring and hideous. Hotel
holidays always sound more glamorous. Nevertheless, camping holidays appeal a
lot of people every year. So, there are strong arguments for and against this
idea.
On the one hand, camping holidays are cheaper and funnier. You can do
many outdoors activities, like exploring the countryside or taking beautiful
photos. Moreover, you can chill out and relax in the nature.
On the other hand, hotel holidays are comfortable. Everything you need
is in the hotel, for example the meals. In addition to this, if the
weather was bad, you wouldn’t have to worry about the place where you are going
to sleep.
In conclusion, spending holidays outdoors is a peaceful experience that
everyone should try. However, I believe that hotel holidays are better because they
are more enjoyable.

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