ONLINE SHOPPING IS BETTER THAN HIGH STREET SHOPPING
Some people disapprove online shopping because they do
not know to use the websites or the online stores. However, I disagree with
this: buying things on the Internet is becoming one of the most popular ways to go shopping around the world. Nowadays, everybody has bought something by a computer or
smartphone.
In my opinion, online shopping is better and more
comfortable than high street shopping. For example, you can go shopping without
stand up from the armchair. In addition to this, this type of shopping is less
stressful because you can avoid the crowds which could have
the high streets.
Moreover, I personally think that the prices are
cheaper online and it is faster to search the things you want. For example, you
need a green t-shirt, so you will find it in less time if you look for it online. As a result of this, the purchases are increased and the stores
could get more benefices.
To conclude, I believe that the best way to shop is
online, especially if you want to buy something fast and you can stay
comfortable and relaxed. Keep up to date with shopping and discover new
facilities for your convenience!
without stand up --- without standing up
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which could have the high streets.--- Syntax
benefices --- profits
the stores could get more benefices. ---
you can stay comfortable and relaxed.--- Relevant ideas?
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